Very nice sense of dimensionality, especially across the bottom sections.
Still could use more hierarchical focus in the top section. Scale. Could the text at the top be more dominant? Provide some kind of sub head here. You address this in the lower left text, but the caption (e.g. the ways we intake music) should be more integrated into your diagram up there at the top section.
Work on incorporating the heading/subtext - currently it is a bit static residing in the lower left corner. Could the text on the lower left corner own the space more? Again, scale.
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Very nice sense of dimensionality, especially across the bottom sections.
Still could use more hierarchical focus in the top section. Scale. Could the text at the top be more dominant? Provide some kind of sub head here. You address this in the lower left text, but the caption (e.g. the ways we intake music) should be more integrated into your diagram up there at the top section.
Work on incorporating the heading/subtext - currently it is a bit static residing in the lower left corner. Could the text on the lower left corner own the space more? Again, scale.
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