Friday, February 22, 2008

project 1, final artifact

1 comment:

Grant said...

I just wanted to make a comment on very small (but probably very noticeable) detail on your graphic. I really like this graphic and thats why I have to point out something that I think puts kind of a scar across an otherwise really nice piece. It's the title "The Ways People Intake Music." The word intake has to be changed, because it really can't be used that way. I guess you could say "types of musical intake." I hope you don't think I'm just being nitpicky, it's just that I don't think this title does your graphic justice.