Nice improvements. The two on the bottom are the strongest. I'll mention the strengths and weakness in each...
Green mouths: The color pop is nice.
The italic vote sets well on the plain background / and the division created between newspaper and background provides a "visual comma" for the sentence.
However, text should read in the other order as, "Let the issues do the talking, vote".
Brown background: The italic vote is hiding - could use some device (e.g. color) to pop/contrast. And/or incorporate the visual comma from above.
Scroll down to your process... The process shot on the top is terrific (showing the layers and edges of the newspaper and the glow of the light box). Bring that into your finished poster above!
From those others... the bars over eyes is a bit derivative. Plus by doing that you take the emphasis away from the mouths (which is your whole point).
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Nice improvements. The two on the bottom are the strongest. I'll mention the strengths and weakness in each...
Green mouths:
The color pop is nice.
The italic vote sets well on the plain background / and the division created between newspaper and background provides a "visual comma" for the sentence.
However, text should read in the other order as, "Let the issues do the talking, vote".
Brown background:
The italic vote is hiding - could use some device (e.g. color) to pop/contrast. And/or incorporate the visual comma from above.
Scroll down to your process... The process shot on the top is terrific (showing the layers and edges of the newspaper and the glow of the light box). Bring that into your finished poster above!
From those others... the bars over eyes is a bit derivative. Plus by doing that you take the emphasis away from the mouths (which is your whole point).
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